so i read this piece called I break too which inspired this piece which i wrote off the cuff but i hope you enjoy.
Melt You
I am asking for your love to flow,
I know, I know,
you don't need me and you want me to stay away,
but i can't help myself but to come close anyway,
besides, it seems as if you want me close because you are everywhere,
you claim its a glare but all i am reading is a wanting stare,
engrossed in your book only to build a caricature of my smile,
with those "thees and thous", thine heart pleads to be mine,
YOU need love and your thoughts of "leave me be" to my heart calls,
your attempts to repulse, my passion engulfs,
hidden behind the clothes and attempts to act aloof,
is a want to care, a woman desiring to be loved and i am not fooled,
so this time, my touch on the shoulder will only soothe,
my tender hug goodbye will make you swoon,
I will pick at that crack, barge through that gate,
i beg of you, don't fight this, don't push back because there is a twist,
i can promise you this,
i will not break you,
i intend to melt the ice around your heart and ask that you drench me in your love,
i will not break you, i will melt you,
so please, let your love flow.
3 comments:
This is beautiful indeed. I'd like to feature it as a response post for my next post if you don't mind. It made me smile and sigh at the same time.
It makes me wanna fling the gates of the fortress open and let in the sunshine, allowing it to melt all the ice away.
If my monologue was to be a dialogue, I couldn't think of a better script for a response.
It may not have been meant as such but It's the best compliment my writing has been paid to date :) :) To be able to inspire such beauty! *sigh* Thanks...
good stuff! the original and ur response r both great. keep it up!
I did :) you can check it out.
http://etoileoye.blogspot.com/2011/04/melt-you-response-to-my-last-post-i.html
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