Thursday, April 3, 2008

Inaction...then some action

so i think it is about time for an update but i have been lazy so this will be an old piece. A friend Punky actually wrote this piece called Inaction. Sort of melancholy and i like happy so i had no choice but reply with a piece naturally called Action. Here are both of them.


Inaction
sometimes i cant breathe.. you know...like the wind slaps my face..but the air...it doesnt want to be inhaled........im waitin to exhale....

sometimes i cant walk..you know..like the ground holds me up..but my legs ....they wont carry me......im waitin to free myself

sometimes i cant sleep..you know..like my eyes r closed..tight..my body is exhausted but..sleep..it eludes me.......im waitin to dream

sometimes i cant feel..you know..like i know im bleedin..red..blood..my heart.....it's......but......im waitin to cry

sometimes i cant live ...you know..like my life is passin me by..and i watch..like a spectator.......im waitin to be alive

sometimes i cant love..you know..like i want to let you in..and make you the centre of my world.....but my heart........it's.........im waitin to trust

sometimes i cant wait..you know..like it gets unbearable..and i want to scream..but my voice .........its lost........im waitin to........wait?

im.......waitin.....to...... wait..........??????????

wait a second
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still waitin????????.........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
yeah...me too.
its life right?................
lol



Action
sometimes i breathe....u know....with that breeze....enough to let boats sail...so that it overwhelms me..so come on and exhale.

sometimes i stroll....u know...so calm and easy it liberates me...until i am almost lonely.....so walk with me.... and come set yourself free

sometimes i sleep...u know...that deep slumber..peaceful...and u r the reason i dream....so deep....please....come lay with

sometimes i feel....u know...like the blood in my veins....pulsating .. and my heart...throbbing...waiting ..for you to come share my passion

sometimes i live...u know....like i was resuscitated from a coma...and i enjoy.....every heartbeat...come share my pulse.

sometimes i love....u know...like i can't get enough of u....and u are the center of my existence...and my heart....is...asking u to come share my trust

sometimes i wait...u know....until it gets unbearable....until i want to stop...but my soul....it says u are worth it.....worth the wait....so i'll wait.

i'll...wait...forever.......

it's life right?......no it's love.
:)

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Nice.